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Magazine Articles
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Alright, for my articles I chose to do write about my favorite projects and my experience with the creativity blogs. After hearing feedback from my first article I added more graphics and photos to add some juice to the articles. Rather than being so text heavy, although I am struggling because I feel like I don't have enough words. Also I would love any feed back on layout, for the sake of turning something in and being able to get feedback before we have to submit, this is where I am.. I'm not going to lie I am not extremely confident in my articles, I feel they are lacking but I am not sure what. I am going to go back and fix the tracking in my Magazine covers, but is there anything else I should add or omit?
The page 1,4,7 it feel very left heavy. (maybe make the top right image [pg2] come off the grid like the bottom left image [pg1] ) The white block under the text on pg 3 are a little distracting. I would love to see the elements in page 6 image be used to frame the article. (maybe tint the page to be the same color as the paper of the image)
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